The essay will a have a razor sharp focus that will answer the 2 prompts in an impressive manner. What you've done with you're portfolio here is where I would put if you've been rejected in the past, or if its your first time applying be careful here, just give them an overall idea of how hard you worked and anything special you did like construction on your garments etc 4.
Being an intern is one thing, being an extra ordinary intern, that is another story entirely. I feel these skills that I have learnt make me perfect candidate for FIT as I am passionate about the major I am applying to and I know how to put the work in to get the most out of everything I can.
We got it, you're the next Chanel, but to them it may say that you're ego is too big to listen to your professors, and future employers.
You may be sincere about your experience, but you don't want to come off as a whiner, or worse an opportunist looking for pity due to poor life circumstances.
Why you love fashion and or chose to apply to F. These designers inspire me as they made women feel beautiful and glamorous and revolutionised the fashion world.